Đề 1: The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine, Government funding should reflect this, agree or not.
-Để tiết kiệm tiền, ngân sách chính phủ nên tập trung vào phòng ngừa những vấn đề về sức khỏe đặc việt là nghiên cứu thuốc.
First, in order for government to save money on healthcare in the long run, government funding should be channeled more into the preventive path, especially in terms of research on new drugs. For example, if medical scientists had the funding to research on preventive cancers, there would be substantial future saving if they were successful.
p/s: in order to được nới ra thành in order for sb to do sth, để cụ thể hóa đối tương,
bạn nhìn thấy especially không, nó giải thích cho cái preventive path, làm cho câu không thể hoang mang được phải không nào?
Second, since diseases have been evolving faster human knowledge and technology, most drugs and treatments nowadays would be obsolete in coming years if there are no preventive plan. Therefore, in order to ensure that future generations have the treatments for new kinds of illnesses, human knowledge and technology would have no choice but to progress at a faster speech, which requires more funding.
Đề 2: it is suggested that everyone should have a car, a television and a fridge, do disadvantages outweigh advantages for the development of society
- First, in order to entertain, televisions are necessary.
- First, in order for people to get informed, relieve stress, televisions are of of the most effective tools.
- First, in order for people to get informed and relieve stress, televisions are one of the most effective tools. For example, plenty of evidence suggest that watching comedy shows on a daily basis can make stress away, which improves health and quality of life.
p/s: evidence là danh từ không đếm được, dùng evidences là sai, nên chỉ đi với plenty of nhé.
có một câu các bạn nên học thuộc luôn: plenty of evidence suggesting (which suggests giảm còn suggest- xem lại lý thuyết giảm mệnh đề quan hệ https://youtu.be/wHYC904Ve1A
Đề 3: cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transports, why it is not popular and how to increase the popularity.
- first, in order to travel to far-away locations, high speed vehicles are faster than bicycles.
- first, in order to go to locations from far way, high speed, such as, cars and motorblikes etc.. are more practical.
phân tích câu 2:
+ điểm cộng là từ locations from far- way được dùng thành far-away locations
– điểm trừ: chúng ta không dùng vân vân trong such as ko có etc và so on
chỉ nên viết là such as cars and motorbikes. - First, in order to travel to far-away locations, high speech vehicles, such as cars and motorbikes, are substantially less time -consuming than bicycles. For example, travelling intercity or interstate could take weeks or months using bicycles, revealing their inherent limitation on velocity.
chúng ta có vài từ mới:
inherent (adj) vốn có
velocity: speech:
intercity and interstate đơn giản là travel from city to city, hoặc state to state,
revealing là giảm mệnh đề rút gọn của ” . which reveals”
bạn nhìn thấy chưa, có if, có since, in order to… nhuần nhuyễn trong một đoạn 1/2 của phần body rồi. hãy luyện viết cho quen lối viết của người bản xứ nhé.